OK, couple things.
18" of vacuum means you should be running the 8" step-up springs in the Edelbrock. I stretched mine so they rested at 1/4" longer than they came at, to get closer to 9". The rule of thumb is the springs should be 1/2 of your idle vacuum, so that's why I say switch to the 8", and maybe even stretch them. As it is now, you are in the cruise circuit all the time, and with those needles, it means you are running lean as hell. That's why it is doggy right now. You need the more powerful springs to force the step-up pistons up and get into the thin part of the needle when you get on the throttle.
That's your biggest problem right now.
I would still try the needles I suggested above, as well.
Those advance numbers sound like camshaft degrees, which is the way distributors are traditionally specced. Normally you figure 20* of mechanical, and 15* to 25* of vacuum advance. Those are crankshaft degrees. But 10*-11* mechanical and 10* vacuum advance sound like camshaft degrees, which are half as much. Does it say in the instructions which degrees they are talking about? You can check this by noting the timing, then plugging in the vacuum and noting the timing again. You should be able to see whether the timing with the VA hooked up moves 10* or 20*.
My own recommendation is 20 crankshaft degrees mechanical (10* on the cam) and 16 to 24 camshaft degrees vacuum advance (8* to 12* on the cam). That's the range of most GM applications with the HEI. If those numbers you quoted are camshaft numbers, which I strongly suspect they are, you are right on the money.
12* base is OK. With 20* mechanical, that's 32* total advance with the throttle open at rpm, and 52* at cruise, which is about as high as you want to go, and also gives your best mileage. You could try for 16* base later, to get 36* base + mechanical, which is the maximum horsepower/torque point at rpm with the throttle open for GM V8s, but then you need to back the vacuum advance down a bit to keep base+mechanical+vacuum (cruise) at 52. That is, as you increase base timing for more advance during acceleration, you need to bake off vacuum advance to keep cruise timing the same. Make sense?