MrMarty51
Full Access Member
- Joined
- Oct 25, 2012
- Posts
- 7,763
- Reaction score
- 9,937
- Location
- Eastern Montana
- First Name
- Martin
- Truck Year
- 1978
- Truck Model
- K20
- Engine Size
- 400
Well it was a good story.
The character development was interesting, I think the audience really enjoys the "wheel and tire options" but the ending sucks.
Theres no drama or anything which pull the audience back in...maybe a simple bonus fix or a tool trick would help provide a satisfying conclusion..
good luck.